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Hello can anyone critique my introduction to my video? Is it too much? I just want to perfect it before starting any real videos.
Here is the video

Thanks!
Edited by mend0k - 9/10/14 at 11:23pm
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Maybe a little dark so the words aren't especially easy to read. Can the lighting effect actually light up the words? I mean, the light is behind the letters which should make them dark with a glow around their outline, but it doesn't The moving light source seems clever but doesn't seem to be doing much. Can you bring it to the foreground?
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Thanks for the tip, i'll probably just end up removing that whole flashing thing if I can't fix it for my next vid smile.gif
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15 seconds for an intro is abit long if you want to get subs. personally if i'm following a series i don't want to see a long intro since i've already seen it 20+ times if the vids are good. i would say cut it down to 10 seconds or less if you are doing a whole "lets play" type series
post #5 of 6
If it's longer than three seconds I'm gonna stop watching, personally.
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Thanks for the feedback guys, really helps. Il start up tomorrow and it won't be a lets play series it will be something else wink.gif hope yall will like it and thanks again for the feedback thumb.gif
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