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oh do you now... lol


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cool. want a cookie lol.
Can I have a cookie too?
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I liked it, now although I'm only a High School Sophomore I think the sentences should be a little more complex
    
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its cool, there were just a lot of unneeded words that make the paper somewhat confusing. I assume that the paper is supposed to be informative.
When writing a paper you must assume that the reader is a total dumb*** and has no clue about anything.
BTW, I have yet to get anything less than an A on a paper.
My proof was not totally thorough, if it was there would be a lot more. I used to proof read my moms and brothers grad school papers. They always got A's, the ones I didnt proof they got considerably lower grades.
Yeah, we didn't need the snarkyness man, no one really cares about how great your papers are.

EDIT: Sorry about the D/P (not that kind of D/P you sick freak)
    
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I liked it, now although I'm only a High School Sophomore I think the sentences should be a little more complex
Not necessarily more complex but just more informative, direct and straight to the point. But you'll notice as you get older all women are vague and never direct or stright to the point.

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cool. want a cookie lol.
Sure, what kind you got?
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Yeah, we didn't need the snarkyness man, no one really cares about how great your papers are.

EDIT: Sorry about the D/P (not that kind of D/P you sick freak)
I wasnt being "snarky", whatever thats supposed to mean. I was merely stating a fact.
And if you dont want your paper critisized DONT POST IT ON THE INTERNET!
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Not necessarily more complex but just more informative, direct and straight to the point. But you'll notice as you get older all women are vague and never direct or stright to the point.



Sure, what kind you got?
i got some fail chip if you want some. or sugarfail.
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post #27 of 46
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i got some fail chip if you want some. or sugarfail.
Did you bake those using the Fail method? How about some oatmeal failin?
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Lol, in my Freshman english class, that would have been a fairly bad paper.

But clearly your teacher was going for something else.

I bet the people in your class found it interesting, if you had to read it aloud or do any sort of peer editing.
Jeez, I dont think she was asking you to grade it.
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Very nice paper. For all of you who have criticized it, we are waiting for your "better" paper.

I'm glad I'm not in California with that kW/h rate. Its $.054/hr where I'm at. It's only $30/month over what the bill normally is, without computers on.

+ for the paper.
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