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6/21/11 at 10:29pm
I liked this one better. At first, I completely missed your sister because I glanced over it quickly and she was fairly dark and kinda blended in with the background. More natural-looking flesh tones in this one. I think your previous one, the flash made her look kind of pale. I like how the emphasis is on your niece, but I would like to see more lighting on your sister. Maybe that's personal preference, but it kind of bothers me to see her blend in with the background so much. Overall, pretty well done!


DSC_2749 by bfeng91, on Flickr
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6/21/11 at 10:32pm
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6/22/11 at 1:46am
so me and my friends went to the beach and one of my friends just got a canon rebel XTI and i was playing with it

this was my first shot xD

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post #294 of 317
6/24/11 at 6:14am
Love the Lights in the background and the texture in the wall the can is on just adds to the overall image.


Just picked up a Rebel T3i. So far I love using it. Just need to learn how to use it. So far Ive been using the Auto modes or Program. Would like to start stepping into more custom options and modes.


My daughter and son (when he was only a few hours old)



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post #295 of 317
6/27/11 at 4:22am
Those are both good lighting and composition... except for the framing.
1st shot, moms neck is distracting, 2nd shot, legs cut out.
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post #296 of 317
8/22/11 at 9:13am
I would personally straighten it up and have the focal point off centre and have the coins pop a little more.


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post #297 of 317
8/30/11 at 6:54am
biatchi, nice use of selective color. I usually don't like it but it works well here. The overall image is a bit dark and there is a lot of negative space at the top of the image. Maybe try cropping a bit off the top?


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9/5/11 at 12:36pm
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I like it, very professional. I would've focused more on the city, maybe had less water/sky and more "action", but the way it splits at the middle between water and city is really nice too.

Took this with my P&S:
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9/5/11 at 4:15pm
The perspective gives great depth to this photograph but it is slightly underexposed imo mostly due to light fall off. I know it was created with a P&S camera so hard to be picky. The composition is strong which is what matters in this case.

Here's mine:
Nikkor 60mm micro with off camera flash to add a little extra light to the front of the rings.
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8/13/12 at 9:57pm
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gollie View Post

The perspective gives great depth to this photograph but it is slightly underexposed imo mostly due to light fall off. I know it was created with a P&S camera so hard to be picky. The composition is strong which is what matters in this case.

Here's mine:
Nikkor 60mm micro with off camera flash to add a little extra light to the front of the rings.
Courtney-and-Greg319-M.jpg

Back from the dead.

It would be nice to see without the water mark, over all I can't say anything really bad about it, it's a great photo thumb.gif

Here is mine from a river bed that was drying up in Alaska.


Edited by GoodInk - 8/30/12 at 12:16pm
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