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Well apart from the first comment which was very useful C&C - all other posts have been utter crap. Including "don't think this counts as C&C. Plain rude."

sure my post might not have been very constructive, but looking at this thread, it is so far the second most constructive comment. I am simply stating an opinion, that a slightly more attractive model might have a more optimistic response.

On top of that, I find the lighting slightly off in a few photos, where the models skin seems unnaturally pale (extremely white), which is also off-putting. Other than that, all around it is a good shoot.
Your post wasn't constructive at all, it was just purely insulting.

And you are talking about a lack of constructive posts? There's only like 1 post before yours. Here's a constructive post:

Make like a tree and ****.
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post #12 of 21
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Well apart from the first comment which was very useful C&C - all other posts have been utter crap. Including "don't think this counts as C&C. Plain rude."

sure my post might not have been very constructive, but looking at this thread, it is so far the second most constructive comment. I am simply stating an opinion, that a slightly more attractive model might have a more optimistic response.

On top of that, I find the lighting slightly off in a few photos, where the models skin seems unnaturally pale (extremely white), which is also off-putting. Other than that, all around it is a good shoot.
What the hell difference does it make how the model looks? Get out troll.

@OP I agree, the lighting seems like it could have been better in a couple photo's, but overall I like the poses and shots, really nice stuff dude.
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Better model? She is fine imo you nerds imagine the ones you will never get type girls (not all nerds here, Majority though)
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What the hell difference does it make how the model looks? Get out troll.

@OP I agree, the lighting seems like it could have been better in a couple photo's, but overall I like the poses and shots, really nice stuff dude.
Oh, this as well. A $20 double sided reflector + someone to hold it for you could make a lot of difference Not as effective as an off shoe flash setup, but certainly much cheaper.
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Did you 4670 her after the shoot?

Win.

Sorry, couldn't resist
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http://www.flickr.com/photos/colbyja...7626257030655/
Love this one.
I really have no comment to make since I'm also a beginner.
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post #18 of 21
A couple were a bit over-exposed for my taste, but great model, great shots!
post #19 of 21
I don't like how harsh the light it, you could have bounced it off the floor or something. And ISO 800 with strobes? Thats silly! When using strobes, stay as low as you can since you don't need all the sensitivity.
post #20 of 21
Since you have an off-camera flash, try experimenting with these portrait lighting patterns:

http://www.portraitlighting.net/patternsb.htm
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