Aqualan

It's still coming along, but wanted some pro's to look at the flow and layout. Let me know if you see any issues.

site: http://www.buildahotbody.com

Thanks in advance.

Totally re-made the page using the holygrail layout.

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XaNe

Not trying to be mean. I just started advanced web class a more than a month ago we only use notepad++ and i can make something better and more visually appealing. In about a hour.

and your logo.gif looks really bad....

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Sgt.Collins

Well good intentions aside, it was still kind of mean. He was asking for feedback, not others bashing his work.

My opinion is to crop the pictures to size instead of stretching them. Also, it kind of looks like it is one of those sites with a bunch of ad's on them and says 'What you need, when you need it'
Try adding more products and description on the front page maybe?

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Aqualan

That was one of my future projects..much appreciated.


btw. I have thick skin, (was/am a Marine) so no need to be candid.

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Aqualan

I updated my logo. I see a few people looking, But no comments. Is it that bad, lol. Well anyway, Thanks for looking, any comments welcome.

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afzsom

Try to style the home page so it's a seamless transition to the store-front.

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XaNe

sorry i was trying to give some feedback i had no intentions of being mean. Well that is how you learn.

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Aqualan

Can you elaborate of what you mean? It looked pretty seamless to me, but I'm a total noob.

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Aqualan

I didn't think you were mean at all. Thanks for the feedback. What do you think of the new logo?

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afzsom

By seamless I mean visually seamless. It should look like a continuation, not a sudden change in color, layout, size, font, logo etc. Here's an illustration.

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