Your setup looks just fine. But you said you have decided the "RAM" should be inside the case. I think you meant the "RAD"
If you can set the "RAD" on top of the case it would help you achieve lower temps as the air flowing through the RAD will be cooler.
Basically you want the following loop order (which I see you already have):
Reservoir -> Pump -> Radiator -> CPU Block -> GPU Block
You might also want to consider adding a Y-Splitter to split the water coming out of the Radiator equally to the CPU and the GPU.
Then when the water comes out of both the CPU and GPU you can also use a Y-Splitter (inverted this time) to channel the water to the Reservoir.

If you can set the "RAD" on top of the case it would help you achieve lower temps as the air flowing through the RAD will be cooler.
Basically you want the following loop order (which I see you already have):
Reservoir -> Pump -> Radiator -> CPU Block -> GPU Block
You might also want to consider adding a Y-Splitter to split the water coming out of the Radiator equally to the CPU and the GPU.
Then when the water comes out of both the CPU and GPU you can also use a Y-Splitter (inverted this time) to channel the water to the Reservoir.