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I have to write a sonnet for english as part of a larger media assignment. It needs to be good and the one I wrote is about Romeo and Juliet, here's it is what do u think? (forgive possible mistakes in shakespearean english)

If Montague be innocent and true,
Then Romeo's the only one thereof,
But Capulet is equally to do,
in honesty innocence. For love
Of Juliette and Romeo, unique
Of aspects of their houses; sepàrate,
Their love so pure, so wholesome, yet so bleak,
Inferring a disaster whence they met.
For love so strong is beautiful, but rare,
That fueding houses ne'er can squelch its truth,
That love's eternal flame is burning e'er,
That happiness resounds, though thought uncouth.
Two lovers tangled in this web of hate.
Two lovers unprepared to meet their fate.

BTW: it's in iambic pentameter
 

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Sounds good to me! I just finished my English 12 poetry section as well, so I think my approval should be confirmation enough that it'll do you good.
 
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